...Sheet Music...

By NikesRain

your every word
caresses my mind
with fingers fit
for a piano's keys
playing sighs
from my soul
with hushed notes
enticing me
in the night


violin strings
lay over my desire
you place your bow
drawing across them
pulling notes
effortlessly
with alluring darkness
that resonates
from your being


create with me a flow
of tones and melodies
so sweet as to
cause weeping
so intense
it infuses
the sound
in my being

wrap me
in the exquisite velvet
of your midnight hued music
make me sing
your name forever

i dare you



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Copyright 2004 drdavis
Published on Wednesday, November 24, 2004.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • elisa On Tuesday, April 5, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    you can never go wrong with a motive set to beautiful music....and the dare just sweetens the deal;) elisa

  • A former member wrote: "wrap me in the exquisite velvet of your midnight hued music" Flows & feels like lover's fingers across piano keys in a passionate melody; the flesh melded w/ violin strings, infused. You have giving music a new feel, or opened old wounds; beautiful w

  • A former member wrote: beautiful wounds...

  • A former member wrote: *Clapping* "wrap me in the exquisite velvet"..marvelous..thanks..Imad

  • A former member wrote: wonderful beautifully written

  • A former member wrote: double dare? :P

  • A former member wrote: this was such a lush piece rene. masterfully woven.

  • Sin On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    this was divine both in concept and flow, a very beautiful write from a very beautiful person ~kristy

  • Malice In Wonderland On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    Wonderfully elegant, your imagery astounds me dear Rene...Exquisite write... Kya Scholar

  • Armand On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, Armand (57)By person wrote:

    once again, proving that you are the goddess of metaphor. if i could only make you sing my name forever...

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