...Sheet Music...
By NikesRain
your every word
caresses my mind
with fingers fit
for
a piano's keys
playing sighs
from my soul
with hushed
notes
enticing me
in the night
violin
strings
lay over my desire
you place your bow
drawing
across them
pulling notes
effortlessly
with alluring
darkness
that resonates
from your being
create with me a flow
of tones and melodies
so sweet as to
cause weeping
so intense
it infuses
the sound
in my being
wrap me
in the exquisite velvet
of your midnight hued music
make me sing
your name forever
i dare you
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Copyright 2004 drdavis
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On Tuesday, April 5, 2005, elisa
(1616) wrote:
you can never go wrong with a motive set to beautiful music....and the dare just sweetens the deal;) elisa
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A former member wrote:
"wrap me
in the exquisite velvet
of your midnight hued music" Flows & feels like lover's fingers across piano keys in a passionate melody; the flesh melded w/ violin strings, infused. You have giving music a new feel, or opened old wounds; beautiful w
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A former member wrote:
beautiful wounds...
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A former member wrote:
*Clapping* "wrap me in the exquisite velvet"..marvelous..thanks..Imad
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A former member wrote:
wonderful beautifully written
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A former member wrote:
double dare? :P
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A former member wrote:
this was such a lush piece rene. masterfully woven.
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On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, Sin
(1168) wrote:
this was divine both in concept and flow, a very beautiful write from a very beautiful person ~kristy
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On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
Wonderfully elegant, your imagery astounds me dear Rene...Exquisite write... Kya
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On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, Armand
(57) wrote:
once again, proving that you are the goddess of metaphor. if i could only make you sing my name forever...