slowly killing me

By darkangelXlll

the needle slowly penatrateing

into the conjunction of my tissues

releasing the colorless fluid

that slowly decompose my vains

leaving me lieing here

not knowing when it'll be my last breath

from this point on i inhale as hard as i can

tring to hold on to life

thinking how it will be when im lifeless

when i can't feel anymore

thinking how can i forget

inhaling once again

to all my memories

and exhaling all the negetivity

all i want to hold on to

is the life i once had...

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Copyright 2004 darkangelXlll
Published on Saturday, November 20, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • toy soldier On Saturday, February 18, 2006, toy soldier (26)By person wrote:

    your such a good poet, where did you go?

  • Munkey On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, Munkey (79)By person wrote:

    I can almost see you in my arms dear, please don't do this but the write was amazing. love ya;) -Munkey-

  • A former member wrote: although I don't envy you for what got you to write this, I do envy you for your ability to write those emotions down. vey good write

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