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A Virgin's Prayer
By Atalanta
I am about to give myself
To the man I love
This is my first time
Will it hurt?
How much will I bleed?
Will he still love me afterwards?
I am so scared
Will my body be thought of as ugly?
Will I not kiss him right?
Oh, fuck it!
The inexperience and awkwardness of it all!
I know that I can't go wrong
If I just give him my love
**This is pretty much how I felt when I lost my virginity. Sadly, the guy
doesn't want to talk to me anymore**
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Copyright 2004 Atalanta
Published on Friday, November 12, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "A Virgin's Prayer"
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On Wednesday, December 1, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428)
wrote:
nice write sweetie, guy must be an idiot to give up on a beautiful person like yourself. i like the simplicity of the racing thoughts... the questioning.. well done
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On Friday, November 12, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
we truely all are like that .. fuck us men .. not litturaly
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On Friday, November 12, 2004, Rone4611
(123) wrote:
very pretty. like how it's layed out.. or laid out... get it ...laid... sorry. and i agree with devon if it was givin in love it shoulda been treasured. good write
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On Friday, November 12, 2004, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
the first time is not the "messure" darlin........you will inherit the best of memories still...............well done........urban
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On Friday, November 12, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
The honesty of this gives the slightest sting. I like how you did this.. very well done.
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On Friday, November 12, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
Then the guy is a fool neh? anything given in love, even a kiss on the cheek is special and should be treasured. good write. Devon
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A former member wrote:
I wish my first time had been in love...
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