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Bury My Heart With Demons
By Stormcomin
These shadows fill my dreams
To nightmarish extremes
Giving birth to my death upon calling
Then on wings I arise
In a fiery disguise
Spitting hate at my corpse below crawling
Of horror I am born
In cold flesh I am sworn
Screaming laughter in verses of terror
With eyes that bleed tears
Of depression and fears
Despising the breath of God's error
Punish me wholly for the sins I have known
Pummel my soul with a quarry of stone
Bleed me with blades that shear hope from the bone...
...and bury my heart with demons
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Copyright 2004 Stormcomin
Published on Tuesday, November 9, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Bury My Heart With Demons"
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On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, stuart_pid
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wrote:
you have very impressive skills. as eloquent and intricate as poetry should be with deep and well concieved content. i also really liked the rhyme scheme. rhyming kicks ass.
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On Tuesday, November 9, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
ooh, impressive metre! I especially appreciated that you didn't get 'stuck' in one form of rhyme scheme, but nor did you chop and change needlessly, thus losing effect. Very well written piece; reads like a dark chant somehow. Welcome to DP. :)
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On Tuesday, November 9, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
I reiterate...The subject matter while not appealing to me personally, has been well written and eloquently expressed...There is much talent here...
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