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murder lead with ink
By Six-Out
I write. for me
these words weaved onto page- upon page
metaphor- upon metaphor on these pages. are my words
simple.mental seduction: with a pen
my words- they used to heal me
my words- they used to be mine. these words kill me
tears: meet paper- as my pen glides solemnly across
solemn-ly. alliterative allure- and the world ends at the end of each poem
my pen stops- and you
you don't exist, when my words don't let you
break/broken dreams- maybe wings upon my pen(cil)
stenciled heart-marks and stark naked before you
these words are not my words- yet they bare me like never before
my heart on your table as these fabled words- these words that aren't mine
they kill me- mental.simple repulsion. with these lines
no words. just me and my pen
as I murder lead with ink
and it kills me
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Copyright 2004 Six-Out
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On Friday, March 4, 2005, AniDayz
(820)
wrote:
painfully written...a shadow of a feeling i know so well. but your words hit me deeply in the gut of my being...i dunno what else to say, but i wholle-heartedly agree w/ cre.
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On Wednesday, November 17, 2004, cre
(411) wrote:
Sixie . . I don't know how you keep tearing your heart out and putting it into poetic form . . it's intense, how real your words are. Your words are yours still . . but we all want to touch them and be close to something so incredible.
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On Thursday, November 11, 2004, Revolting Theatre
(31) wrote:
"you don't exist, when my words wont let you" god damn six...what the fuck. I just shouted your poem to everyone in the house. brilliant work.
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A former member wrote:
This is quiet, yet confrontational. It captures a vivid, imaginative truth that sustains an essence of disturbing atmosphere, setting a distinguished poem in stone that is unlike anything I have ever had the gratification of reading. ~ Rose
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A former member wrote:
i love the way this one flows. i think just because you wrote it so well, that this poem "hits-home-base" (for lack of a better cliche)
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A former member wrote:
you write perfectly to my tastes. i love your style, and i know where youre coming from. brilliant, one of my favorite for a decent amount of time
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On Sunday, November 7, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
exquisite, and really thought out,the repeating of :words: gives it an extra edge,very well constructed
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On Sunday, November 7, 2004, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
nicely written six.
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On Saturday, November 6, 2004, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
slowly violent, and subtly evoking.... very interesting work. Thank you.
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On Saturday, November 6, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
Very emotional...I can't really think of much, the combination of the work itself and tonights mood...to the point, brutal to an extent...well spoken.Kya
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On Saturday, November 6, 2004, sIo
(926) wrote:
wow. i like this a lot
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