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In lack of anything substantial
By Storm
My soul is decomposing
ridding the body of its
purpose.
Soulless I walk
through the valley of darkness
afraid no more
I have no more
(reason)
All I had was a pointed dagger to your
bleeding heart
and no consciense to stop me.
Never knew I regret deeper,
more tormenting,
than that I feel standing over your shell.
Emptied for me,
as the sky falls down upon us.
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Copyright 2004 Storm
Published on Saturday, November 6, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, VenomPlease
(134)
wrote:
"All I had was a pointed dagger to your bleeding heart and no consciense to stop me." chilling. excellent write
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On Wednesday, November 17, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
awesome piece...I love the last stanza, really caught my attention and drew me totally in.
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On Saturday, November 6, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
What a feeling, one I am certain we are all familer with in some fasion or another. I like this. Great job.
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On Saturday, November 6, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
brillaint!.. the emptiness and desolation you portrayed here was profound!
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On Saturday, November 6, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
It feels like you were breaking as you wrote this. Lovely work. Seems really delicate.
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On Saturday, November 6, 2004, agentlemenspromise
(42) wrote:
my soul is decomposing... i love new ways to fall apart. ~Gentlemen
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On Saturday, November 6, 2004, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
My, my...this was entralling. Short, but packed one hell of a punch.
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On Saturday, November 6, 2004, manywalks
(750) wrote:
The last line just drove this piece a little deeper, wonderful. ~ mw
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On Saturday, November 6, 2004, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
left me feeling empty as well - nicely done!!
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