Descending Hallway of Fears
By stuart_pid
Apprehensive steps descend the corridor of fear.
The walls become alive with breath.
Imaginary terrors
inexplicably scream out to my subconscious.
Wrenching my soul.
Begging me to flee.
Pressing ahead against all better judgement,
I throw open the golden door
and step forward,
entering through,
into
enlightenment.
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Copyright 2004 Ken Ashby
Published on Friday, November 5, 2004.
Filed under:
"Graphic Art"
Comments on "Descending Hallway of Fears"
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On Saturday, August 27, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(358) wrote:
wow this is such a cool pic
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On Tuesday, April 12, 2005, so_skeevy
(64) wrote:
That picture is perfect for the title.
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On Tuesday, March 1, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
wow..Love the picture, its fucking amazing. and a great write to go along with it!
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A former member wrote:
wow! i love that this had a happy ending, and i love that the first stanza was exactly how i would verbalize a nightmare if i could. above all i was suprised and excited that it ended with enlightenment and not somthing stupid and petty like "suicide" (em
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A former member wrote:
(emo) ha ha ha! nice work stuart_pid!.............................................................................................................-samone
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On Thursday, December 16, 2004, shadowsinthelight
(146) wrote:
Nothing to fear but . . . dreams. The art reminds me of a nightmare. S.
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On Saturday, December 11, 2004, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
this is so damn confronting... the artwork in itself suffocates me, but the poetry - it perfectly evokes feelings of constriction, suffocation and panic.... awesome piece. Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
whoa.............
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On Tuesday, November 16, 2004, Stormcomin
(32) wrote:
You have written this in a way that actually takes me into the picture, into the words...and into a state of awe. Excellent work!
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On Monday, November 15, 2004, girlafraid
(480) wrote:
i like this for reasons i can't explain...i love when i feel like that...sorry for the stupid comment, but i had to let you know I that like this...
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A former member wrote:
This is exceptional, for lack of a better word.I love the picture . . . and the poem is outstanding. ~ Rose.
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On Saturday, November 6, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
this was absolutely fantastic.. the pic fitted so beautifully with the depth of your perceptions... an amazing piece of work!
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A former member wrote:
The poem is majestic and the picture is very impressive-love it
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On Friday, November 5, 2004, StAinedNblood
(27) wrote:
The picture is awesome and so is the poem
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On Friday, November 5, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
This just rocks. I love the pic, and the poem to go with it. I could feel the feel for a minute, then joy.
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On Friday, November 5, 2004, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
very cool !
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On Friday, November 5, 2004, Storm
(143) wrote:
Nightmare.. this was different and great, and haunting. Very well done.. ~s