soliloquy.

By maddin foxxxy

Cold
As winter breeze
Arriving
There are million cracks upon a single memory
Nothing can erase

Released from your arms
Into this weather
I don't remember ever feeling that way
Now i don’t forget

I hear your voice in laughter
Waves of distant echoes
Just choke on your every smile
Now won't you?
I lost it
When i dreamt it
I gained it . .
No .. . .I pretended it


There's no more pretense
It's your same old face
In a mask of rage
And in a blink the river flows
And we are rearranged

It gets to me
To contemplate it and
Not reach it
To fight it
and not win it

Choke on your every thought
Now won't you?
Nothing in your mind is related
To me anymore
And I was there
Convincing myself
Everything was not lost . .

you shut me off and . .



All i ever wanted to do
Was save the both of us . .
All i ever wanted to say to you is
I FORGIVE YOU LOVE



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Copyright 2004 maddin foxxxy
Published on Monday, November 1, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Sin On Friday, December 9, 2005, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    this was so soft and devastating...i cant believe this doesnt have more comments...

  • diavolessa On Monday, January 31, 2005, diavolessa (208)By person wrote:

    'we are rearranged'...the feeling of not belonging to anything other that the one cursed love...I felt a shiver run down my spine

  • darkleprechaun On Friday, November 19, 2004, darkleprechaun (56)By person wrote:

    i enjoyed this fine cup of wine... it quenched a parched throat.... many thanx

  • urbanhumility On Friday, November 12, 2004, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    your depth keeps me comming back......you are unmatched in your empathy.....and unmatched in your understanding...............well done........urban

  • A former member wrote: "All i ever wanted to do Was save the both of us . . All i ever wanted to say to you is I FORGIVE YOU LOVE" . . Oh my, I sincerely feel tears swelling. Just magnificent. ~ Rose ~

  • Anth On Monday, November 1, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    powerful and written in such a beautiful way so as to keep me totally interested and impressed

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