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acapella lullabies [singing to the stars]
By Six-Out
dr-ape.d in a blank.et of sublimin-ality/
-I watched the stars dance:: tonight
to the beat_of bullets with butterfly .wings
and listen.d to acapella lullabies
sung to the mid-October air
as dew/drops laced the horizon
and we begged the s.u.n- not to rise
:fogged eyes and long-spoken/ goodbyes
k.iss the edge_of tonight-
and/ listen to the stars sing back::
humbl.d by all_ around us
and taken back by what is still hidden
time stands still/ and nothing-really-matters
because/. tonight
is.-by all accounts
...amazing
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Copyright 2004 Six-Out
Published on Sunday, October 17, 2004.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, July 12, 2005, Elegant Kiss
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wrote:
I miss our pancake house.
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A former member wrote:
This still fucking owns me. I miss your face.
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A former member wrote:
I' ve read this probably ten times...and I'm still drinking in your words. Such a timeless, fragile piece. ...and I weep the skies.
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On Sunday, October 17, 2004, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
poignant work here - great write!
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On Sunday, October 17, 2004, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
After reading this a second time and not focusing on how evil you are... it's pretty damn good. Very thoughtful and moving. Nice work bud.
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A former member wrote:
This left me speechless. Even as I still have miles to go before I sleep, the night sat on my skin like morning dew, replaying each second at every pore.. ":fogged eyes and long-spoken/ goodbyes"...
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A former member wrote:
..artic hands and the blue sun. Thank you... For you.
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