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~WHIRLPOOL OF MADNESS~
By Zhee
(complex PTSD)
Crushed, the wretched mind
Blatant catharsis raves,
Buried memories exhumed
Defile their repressed graves.
[Embrace the caustic wounds
Bleeding fire within your eye,
Visions scratching out your soul
Till you can’t even cry…]
Scarred, the sensual perception
Mirages of terror ignites,
Hurtled in chasms of lunacy
Consummates crucifying rites.
[Wear the noose of anguish
Plundering hands decorously tie,
Bleeding on the sacrificial altar
That was made to watch you die…]
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~bathing in acrid tears,
break the spell of desecration
holding you prisoner -
in this whirlpool of madness~
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Copyright 2004 Zhee
Published on Friday, October 15, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "~WHIRLPOOL OF MADNESS~"
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A former member wrote:
This is so goddamn brilliant. "~bathing in acrid tears, break the spell of desecration holding you prisoner - in this whirlpool of madness~"; Your work gives me borrowed wings, yet pins me down like a butterfly. Just amazing. ~*~ Rose ~*~
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A former member wrote:
I'm breathless... choking in napalm w/this one... your words... they are...
like cluster bombs... dropped from afar... thank you...
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A former member wrote:
"Embrace the caustic wounds
Bleeding fire within your eye,
Visions scratching out your soul
Till you can’t even cry" godamn, i'm jealous of that one, extraodinary write
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On Friday, October 15, 2004, K_Love
(525)
wrote:
damn.. I loved loved loved the last 2 stanzas. This was magnificent!
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On Friday, October 15, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
you put my mind in a whirlpool...I'm still spinning...
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A former member wrote:
This is like a blur of complexity...really excellent.
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