Comercialism

By liquid_emotion

The world is pink and red
hearts doodled with a pen
Cupid is flying ahead
To cure the lonely men

Some say it's pain undo
For those of us alone
But I have to disagree
Although I'm cynic prone

Because the world is always pink
When sipping on good wine
And since I'm drinking alone
The entire bottle is mine!

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Copyright 2003 liquid_emotion
Published on Friday, February 14, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Friday, May 9, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (253)By person wrote:

    I love this! Great rhythm! You are awesome, liquid_emotion!

  • IceDragoness On Monday, May 5, 2003, IceDragoness (195)By person wrote:

    Very cute ~Dawn

  • DoctorAsh On Friday, April 25, 2003, DoctorAsh (373)By person wrote:

    HA ... the world is always pink, when sipping on good wine ... i love it ..

  • A former member wrote: the entire bottle is mine.. spoken like a true lush. girl after my own heart.

  • Jonas On Thursday, February 20, 2003, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    fuck yea! and once again for good measure holy-cow-fuck yea! that's hitting the nail on the head.

  • A former member wrote: this goes straight to heart for me. hehe. My b-day is on V-day. I still have not figured out why that makes me special.

  • urbanhumility On Friday, February 14, 2003, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    tou shea --- cupid . good write

  • A former member wrote: i didn't like it much... until the last stanza, which killed me... good save, funny poem, nice job

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