?//ysteries?

By Mistress Morbid

Two ships that pass by in the night
Do we dare stop and linger or
Continue gliding our own separate ways

The moonlight casts silver shadows
Along the deck, dancing and writhing
With the breeze's movements

Have you waited your whole life for this?
The day where someone completely understands
The trials and tribulations brought about

The lover's coil shall coil no more
And the serpents tail shall lash no more
Serenity takes back her hold and calms the land

The splendor of the netherworld has taken me in
Swallowed me whole and taken me in
Deep within it cracks of the imagination

Do you dare walk beside me as I walk on shells?
Do you dare follow me in the pits of a fiery hell?
Do you dare love me for who I am, and not who I seem to be?



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Copyright 2004 Mistress
Published on Monday, October 4, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Numbers Peppelini On Thursday, March 24, 2016, Numbers Peppelini (95)By person wrote:

    Poetically haunting account to whether our love can ever be for somebody? TY

  • Solace On Thursday, March 17, 2005, Solace (1081)By person wrote:

    *smiles at Mr King* he would love a demon...and he does in you...such a depth of fire that burns through this work, you have a passion that none else have...wonderful

  • Mr King On Friday, March 4, 2005, Mr King (548)By person wrote:

    Yes...

  • A former member wrote: Incredible. Just tremendously beautiful and distinguished. Whimsical, intriguing, curious . . simply sublime.

  • Anth On Saturday, October 9, 2004, Anth (1141)By person wrote:

    such a striking poem,a unique style of writing here thats hard to place, a fascinating work that carries so much and really lingers ,one ill need to come back too,masterful write

  • DarkWolf On Saturday, October 9, 2004, DarkWolf (420)By person wrote:

    Excellent questions.. I esp. love the very last line.. so many people need to ask that question, instead of trying to be someone they are not for a love that is so conditional.. well done. -Michael

  • A former member wrote: I was touched by this. Thank you.

  • NikesRain On Monday, October 4, 2004, NikesRain (1341)By person wrote:

    I'd quote a line but I liked all of it so much. It has such a quiet ethereal voice to it. It's just too lovely to pick one part. *sigh* beautiful work

  • DoctorAsh On Monday, October 4, 2004, DoctorAsh (389)By person wrote:

    Wow - this is fucking awsome - a true piece of prosax - this left me feeling incomplete, or unexperienced in what to buy in a department store. an excellent type. [D&A]

  • Mistress Morbid On Monday, October 4, 2004, Mistress Morbid (455)By person wrote:

    You are one odd cookie

  • Zhee On Monday, October 4, 2004, Zhee (539)By person wrote:

    i loved the last line.. this was beautiful and full of feeling...

  • Angst Queen On Monday, October 4, 2004, Angst Queen (372)By person wrote:

    wow...i love the way you worded this. its an excellant poem

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