unhealthy desire?

By mysticventures







Desire

Permeates my very skin

Erupting in festering boils of depravity

Oozing with wanton lust

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God help me

I am sick

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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Sunday, October 3, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Virgils Vigil On Tuesday, May 10, 2011, Virgils Vigil (75)By person wrote:

    Quick yet thought provoking. I enjoyed this. Scholar

  • Kinkypoptart On Wednesday, May 11, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    hmmm... Thought provoking ~*~Tart~*~

  • DarkWolf On Wednesday, October 6, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    I find sharing this sickness with one equally as ill does wonders for .. everything.. Well done Mystical One. -Michael

  • GreekPhilosopher On Wednesday, October 6, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (156)By person wrote:

    Hehehe. I Thought This Was Pretty Cool, All Be It In A Rather Twisted Way. Grin. GPhD.

  • A former member wrote: love it...great write!!!*ScandaL*

  • Angst Queen On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, Angst Queen (370)By person wrote:

    is that what you are? i do not think so i love this

  • lordshadow On Monday, October 4, 2004, lordshadow (153)By person wrote:

    aren't we all?

  • A former member wrote: I breathe this, I live this, I taste this...I favorite this. =)

  • A former member wrote: "Oozing with wanton lust" - I love this.

  • mysticventures On Sunday, October 3, 2004, mysticventures (538)By person wrote:

    who would figure sex?

  • A former member wrote: from what ive seen most of your pieces are simplistic, but all the while worth reading and an enjoyable work. nice job

  • Zhee On Sunday, October 3, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    brilliant! such depth in simplicity... this was portrayed absolutely perefctly!

  • Anth On Sunday, October 3, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    awesome thought,yet again expressed and displayed flawlessly

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