Fucking on Film

By Six-Out

Hint: Not for those un-loving of the sexual word games.
Not for the young eyes, either.

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[act 1]our own movie begins

the static gives way to a portrait
lain on the bed
eyes aglow with passion...

mouthing the words of seduction
playing to the lens
as your hands move the lengths of your body
calling me with your moans
of lust

the frame shakes as the scene
begins to take focus
I circle you- as you play to the camera
"put it down...and come to me"


-
[act 2]and your body is bare before me

negligent to all surroundings
as your hands begin to work-
/I so eagerly await --to take their place

my lips touch your skin
kissing away all inhibition- from the feet up
your body quakes as I graze your perfection
my breath accenting your need

"kiss me"

-my lips, touch yours
and slowly work their way to your neck
/you pull me closer as I-
whisper sweet words of pleasure
in your ear...as I lick my way down

---
my tongue caressing your body-
you moan/with pleasure- maybe ecstasy

"take me"

[act 3]sweat pours from you

as you climb on top
-you love the feel of _me/inside
or so your nails in my chest
lead me to believe

the sound of me-meeting-you
in a symphony of [us]
as your screams echo the halls
and your nails pierce my skin
with your fiery exuberance

"fuck me"

I pull your- hair back/ as you let out a [scream]
and your body _quivers. as you
fall onto me



-
kissing down my chest
your devil-ish eyes peer up at me
intent on giving me what I gave you


[act 4]you have complete control

as you circle me- gliding your hands
_over my flesh. loving it

this night is now yours
--and your eyes tell me/ enough
to know it's far
from over

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Copyright 2004 Six-Out
Published on Saturday, October 2, 2004.     Filed under: "Erotica" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I read this a few years back but I didn't comment. What a unique poem.

  • DarkVxn On Tuesday, May 29, 2012, DarkVxn (68)By person wrote:

    this one has a good progression. i felt some of the line breaks or characters (i.e.: / and _) were a bit distracting--but that could have just been the sexy content. ;) erotica isn't easy to accomplish. good work here.

  • Carmina Gitana On Friday, May 4, 2012, Carmina Gitana (159)By person wrote:

    I have to say, I really, REALLY enjoyed this . . . even though the title made Duran Duran play in my head for a second :) All kidding aside, great, great piece of erotic writing, and I appreciate the restraint when it it comes to "naughty" words - makes it so much more subtle and pervasive.

  • A former member wrote: Very nice writing. it's very open and revealing, I like that.

  • Shortnlethal On Sunday, April 19, 2009, Shortnlethal (68)By person wrote:

    lol "fucking on flim" your more corning than i thought lol...enjoyment to read so late when im looking up radom piece came across this and it made me laugh..thanx for the laughter so late at night ^^

  • Niemand On Friday, November 2, 2007, Niemand (368)By person wrote:

    You know, as much as I hate to admit it, this is pretty damn good! *grins* 'Fucking on Film' Love the title...-Airi

  • Morbid_insanity On Monday, November 27, 2006, Morbid_insanity (76)By person wrote:

    I cant thank of anything to say, It left me utterly speechless. It was just that good. Freakin awesome ~Josh

  • xserratedsoulx On Saturday, November 11, 2006, xserratedsoulx (214)By person wrote:

    this might sound weird but this: [act 3]sweat pours from you " is my fav. line of the whole thing.

  • A former member wrote: I agree with Gothic Symphony on this one. Good job.

  • Dissolving Poet On Friday, September 15, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    Dear god...I think I need a thousand cold showers before I'm me again.. this was fucking awesome*bookmarks* Fucking on film indeed...O.o~Gothic

  • A former member wrote: DAMN. DUDE, AWESOME. THANX FOR THT, LOL.*******!!!

  • PoeticHellion On Thursday, May 25, 2006, PoeticHellion (192)By person wrote:

    Jon, I now want sex.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Thursday, May 25, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1288)By person wrote:

    Thought this would exsplain how some guy with a toolbox and a little oil on his chin allways gets down and nasty with the big boobed blonds.. :P Great write Jon

  • TornPaperDoll On Wednesday, May 10, 2006, TornPaperDoll (63)By person wrote:

    oh my god...this is a good piece...i've tried to write a good sex poem, but nah, mine was useless. this is hot. TPD

  • Vicious Pixie On Friday, April 7, 2006, Vicious Pixie (63)By person wrote:

    sexy.... i loved it

  • A former member wrote: can i read it again? if i was a guy i'd have a serious boner dude... but the last part dragged me back to reality... i do love it

  • Dei On Monday, September 26, 2005, Dei (706)By person wrote:

    not as smooth as some of your others, but it has its own rawness the lends a hand to make it a fun read

  • Sticky Kitty On Wednesday, August 3, 2005, Sticky Kitty (253)By person wrote:

    I wish this never ended. I wanted to keep reading it forever. This was raw, amazing, and so fucking beautiful. I'm in love with it. -kitty

  • Mahakala On Monday, July 18, 2005, Mahakala (209)By person wrote:

    *thinks of all the things I would to on you & to you* Damn...*runs to catch the next plane to TX*

  • blue On Wednesday, March 9, 2005, blue (1457)By person wrote:

    That was actually over the top with a classy approach, nice blend of sexuality and adoration. *nods head* ~b

  • AniDayz On Wednesday, March 9, 2005, AniDayz (822)By person wrote:

    .....fuckme.....damn.....

  • Atalanta On Wednesday, November 17, 2004, Atalanta (38)By person wrote:

    Everytime I read this it just makes me want to go and fuck a random hot guy! I fucking love this, Six!

  • Atalanta On Tuesday, November 16, 2004, Atalanta (38)By person wrote:

    Well well well. This put Dirty Dirk and Nash-ty STeve to shame. Very well done!~Atalanta

  • A Velvet Tongue On Friday, November 5, 2004, A Velvet Tongue (450)By person wrote:

    well well, i knew ya had it IN you...or would that be she had it in her..YUM..you know I love the sexy porn poems..Give us more Sixxie..

  • Lotophagi On Monday, November 1, 2004, Lotophagi (341)By person wrote:

    sexy story teller....... damned original and still rocking my world. Thank you.

  • A former member wrote: wow. ......wow. ...wow. im speechless. this was a piece of fucking art. you are a work in itself. i never dreamt the day that you would write something so attractive and desireable. beautiful masterpiece, i must say.

  • KittyStryker On Friday, October 8, 2004, KittyStryker (736)By person wrote:

    awwwwwww, that's so romantic!

  • Ravenblade On Monday, October 4, 2004, Ravenblade (331)By person wrote:

    six, just so you know this does not qualify you as a bigger slut than me, just a more sincere one....but seriously, this was a great piece, soft and genuine, reminds me of things I've been doing here even though I'm not supposed to...>Raven

  • Sin On Sunday, October 3, 2004, Sin (1179)By person wrote:

    Six, this is beautiful and erotic,makes me want to give myself to you ~kristy

  • ColdScaredAlone On Saturday, October 2, 2004, ColdScaredAlone (90)By person wrote:

    awesome! reminds me of my dream of death..hee curse you, corrupting my 'young eyes'!!! nicely done though :)

  • Soulseeker On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Soulseeker (109)By person wrote:

    ::takes a cold shower:: Gosh this is really great! So..... About that trip... :winks: Bethany!

  • Seraphic On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Seraphic (237)By person wrote:

    Poetic porn..you've gotta love that. :) *~seraph~*

  • Rachel On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Rachel (268)By person wrote:

    Well then... I think I need a shower or a cigarette. Maybe both. Yes, definitely both.

  • A former member wrote: This is enchanting...you have that way of romancing moments...I don't think this was quite fucking...it was more making love. But I understand how that isn't quite the same title-wise. ;-)

  • FallenFaith On Saturday, October 2, 2004, FallenFaith (45)By person wrote:

    I love how it's seperated into acts. Anyone can get attention by writing of sex, but when you can do it when the only dirty things is the title, you know you have done a good job.

  • DarkWolf On Saturday, October 2, 2004, DarkWolf (420)By person wrote:

    This is very well done.. excellent work. Tender and sensual throughout.. slowly building to the end. -Michael

  • NikesRain On Saturday, October 2, 2004, NikesRain (1344)By person wrote:

    Michael took the words right out of my head. Astounding job hon. Lovely in it's softness and sensuality. -Doe

  • BeautifulCalamity On Saturday, October 2, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (434)By person wrote:

    i agree, perfect timing for me as well. i really like this, its not all intenstly sexual..because there is a softness and genuiness in it as well.. loved the first two stanzas, which basically set it all off.. "the static gives way to a portrait", lovely

  • elisa On Saturday, October 2, 2004, elisa (1643)By person wrote:

    Late Friday night...I'm all alone... and I read this.......perfect timing Six:) elisa

  • A former member wrote: Apparently the hint at the top didn't work.. Because once I'd read that I just had to continue. Very pretty, erotic work.. Niice. :)

  • Revolting Theatre On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Revolting Theatre (31)By person wrote:

    Six...you dog.

  • Six-Out On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Six-Out (1483)By person wrote:

    You love it.


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