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Nobody's Fool
By mysticventures
Teacher
Preacher
Cosmic leecher
Go suck the life from some other creature
I don't need your dogma
I don't need your rule
Keep your hands out of my pockets
For I'm nobody's fool
Got to pay for salvation?
Are you outta your fucking mind?
It's all free for the taking!
Do you think I am blind?
I've watched and I've listened
And I've witnessed your crap
If I followed your faith
Tis' my free thought you would trap
For my mind - is the universal mind
Never to be ensnared
Only to be experienced
Only to be shared
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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Thursday, September 30, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Nobody's Fool"
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On Thursday, April 8, 2010, Miztaken4beauty
(177)
wrote:
I quite enjoy the biting sarcasm.
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On Thursday, March 16, 2006, Grey Lies
(186) wrote:
....hehe
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On Monday, November 15, 2004, JiNx
(98) wrote:
True *agrees with SCANDAL* -JiNx(ie)
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A former member wrote:
beautiful...*smilez*-ScandaL
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On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, Wizmodios
(2) wrote:
Nice!
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A former member wrote:
so frikkin brilliant!
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On Sunday, October 3, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
sweeeet.
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On Sunday, October 3, 2004, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
this is exactly how I feel about the topic...word for word summarizes my every thought about this. awesome man.
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A former member wrote:
...oooo..love this...down with organized religion!!! *storms the whitehouse*
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On Friday, October 1, 2004, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
i grew up forced to go to church, and some catholic school, i feel this, alot.
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On Friday, October 1, 2004, Graveyard_Desciple
(39) wrote:
this was beautifully written. It is great to read works that I can relate to. Great write. -Randy-
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A former member wrote:
oh the joy of being able to relate to such wonderful pieces! nice work, it holds very strong truth, and it gets down to the point, very basically. magnificently worded.
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On Thursday, September 30, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
Wickedly well done Mystic! Indeed, indeed. Loved this one. So true in so many ways.. very well worded. I can relate to this one very well. -Michael
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On Thursday, September 30, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
raw... cuts down to the bone! i loved the idea...wonderful flow.. amazing write!
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On Thursday, September 30, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
very strong and i love the truth behind it. really great
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On Thursday, September 30, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
yes, this is a very strong piece. and it speaks of the truth. lovely job i must say..-calamity
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On Thursday, September 30, 2004, Whisper
(112) wrote:
This write is strong and true. There are so many people in the world who act just like this. Filthy leeches! ~Whisper~
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