I Fight Alone

By K_Love

Time seems
to be lost
in the
of our
and in the
rips and tears
of our

Moving forward
to pretend
it doesn't
hurt us,
when in reality
our mouths
become dryer
and our eyes become
with every

The paper
with the line
that our blue
or black ink
pens touch
bleed out
our soul
only onto
a thin piece

Thinking to ourselves
we say,
Yes I would rather
bleed out the thoughts
in my crevices
and the tears in my

But yet no one
is by my side,
like a warrior
by themselves
standing against
an army...

I fight alone...

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Copyright 2004 Suicidal_Love
Published on Sunday, September 26, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: You were the first person I ever met on dp. What happened to you?

  • A former member wrote: the way you wrote this poem I could easily listen to smooth music, yet your words are powerful like thunder.

  • Stephanie Sideways On Saturday, December 29, 2012, Stephanie Sideways (304)By person wrote:

    This is certainly how it feels when I write sometimes......., appreciative of a release for a moment. A small offer of therapy! When you send these heartfelt words out there, rest assured a thousand warriors hold up their swords! Much love ! And much loved this write!

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Sunday, May 3, 2009, Spiritus_Frumenti (345)By person wrote:

    there was such a 'sweeping' aspect to this. so melancholy and honest..i love feeling this from a poem...good job...-l-

  • darth ren On Tuesday, November 7, 2006, darth ren (33)By person wrote:

    i really like the structure a lot. easy feeling to relate to, and you said it so well.

  • PointlessX On Tuesday, September 13, 2005, PointlessX (37)By person wrote:

    i wish i could quote a stanza like i ususally do....but every word in this poem hits me like a year of depression and there is nothing to make it any better except understanding and apprectiation of beautifull meaningful words....

  • blue On Thursday, July 14, 2005, blue (1465)By person wrote:

    Splendid words here Kir! My compliments to you love. ~b

  • Serenity On Sunday, May 15, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    This is amazing and powerful in a soft way. Excellent

  • Dei On Tuesday, February 1, 2005, Dei (709)By person wrote:

    awsomely awsome in its supream awsome...nes

  • A former member wrote: I love this, greatly written.

  • VenomPlease On Thursday, December 16, 2004, VenomPlease (135)By person wrote:

    Amazing piece. You are an incredible writer. I really like your style

  • NikesRain On Monday, October 4, 2004, NikesRain (1337)By person wrote:

    wonderfully done and expressed. It tore at me, knowing the truth in the words, feeling every stanza. outstanding

  • Zhee On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, Zhee (539)By person wrote:

    i loved the way this was written.. expressed to perfection...

  • A former member wrote: "bleed out the thoughts".. lovely!

  • GreekPhilosopher On Sunday, September 26, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (156)By person wrote:

    Loved It... Simply Loved It. Thanks GPhD.

  • girlafraid On Sunday, September 26, 2004, girlafraid (497)By person wrote:

    the concept is conveyed brilliantly, along with the emotion...very strong piece...

  • Butterfly On Sunday, September 26, 2004, Butterfly (102)By person wrote:

    Wow I really like this. Love the visuals.

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