A Midnight Conversation (Part 2)

By Munkey



Now I sit here in the darkness
The red of the blood it burns my eyes
Never thought it would come to this
Never thought you'd die

He calls from out in the darkness
I can't deny his voice

I tried to stop it but I had no choice
I had to take your life
If I could have done anything

Trust me I would

It's no the way I would end it
With your blood dripping off my hands

Maybe oneday in the future
I'll try to make amends

But can't you see the blood stains on the wall?
In my dreams he calls

Someone save my soul.....

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Copyright 2004 Chance
Published on Saturday, September 25, 2004.     Filed under:
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  • BeautifulCalamity On Monday, November 1, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    i liked this... nice write

  • Sin On Saturday, September 25, 2004, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    wow.. very dark and lovely. but you know what they say, its ok to talk to yourself its when you answer back you have to worry :)

  • Munkey On Wednesday, November 17, 2004, Munkey (79)By person wrote:

    I always answer myself no-one else does.

  • darkangelXlll On Saturday, September 25, 2004, darkangelXlll (108)By person wrote:

    i loved the blood on hands part and wow i already read it twice me like it tons..

  • darkangelXlll On Saturday, September 25, 2004, darkangelXlll (108)By person wrote:

    ::bravo:: i love the way you word both of them this one is so sad i dont know if its because of the way you described her death or what but this is very very well writen amazin ~darlin :)

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