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PUTTING UP WITH SHIT...LITERALLY!!!
By Zhee
(inspired by my new patient...)
Fraught with fecal stench,
The first breath of morning
Depraves fragile olfaction
Rendering its futile warning...
Elude their bouts of frenzied rage,
Converse with empathy refined,
Battle the dread and nausea
And just examine the mind...
Greet excreta laden walls,
Pacify the revolted heart,
Discern the clandestine meaning
In your patient’s work of art!
(for those who even once thought my work was simple!)
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Copyright 2004 Zheala
Published on Friday, September 24, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "PUTTING UP WITH SHIT...LITERALLY!!!"
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On Friday, September 15, 2006, Bluegirl
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wrote:
yeah, I've done some PCA work. Walking into a room that smells like feces is a real kick in the nutsack. :(( Good poem, though!
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On Friday, October 8, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
ugh...i don't want your job. its not their fault but i just don't think i could manage
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A former member wrote:
weird-ishly creepy, but enjoyable read.
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A former member wrote:
I like this poem, but I'm finding that after reading it, I have to use the bathroom...
~Shane~
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On Saturday, September 25, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Kinda creepy.. I like it, hehe nice read, I enjoyed reading something out of the ordinary. ~Kirsten~
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On Saturday, September 25, 2004, stuart_pid
(135) wrote:
this is amusing to me for some reason.
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A former member wrote:
I really like this poem, reminds me of that old movie the Dentist in a way. Excellent work indeed.
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On Friday, September 24, 2004, girlafraid
(480) wrote:
i'm finding that i can really relate to some of this work...i just started an internship at a hospital, so i guess i know how you feel...
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