Ultra-Violent

By MGood

Imagine a gentle breeze,
That carries a rotting stench.
Animals adapting to please,
Pacing an unholy trench.

Envision a rage,
A jealous fit.
An innocent stage.
A common fuse lit.

Beings of pure beauty,
Painted with doubt.
Misjudging duty.
Devout.

Faithfully referring our hate,
With a wink and an honest smile.
A short kindness shown too late,
Leaving question to compile.

Creating a power.
A supernatural vent.
Our longings devour.
Emotions invent.

Soothing a passion dismissed.
Wrapped in familiar regret.
A heartfelt twist.
An Attempt to forget.

Relaxed in delay,
Surrounded,
By the threat of dismay,
We have founded.

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Published on Friday, November 30, 2001.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Kinkypoptart On Tuesday, April 19, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    very interesting, and it does indeed get the reader thinking. Good Write ~*~Tart~*~

  • A former member wrote: sublimely thought provoking and kind of entrancing. awesome work.

  • knightmirror On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    amazing visions were implanted in my mind......i enjoyed this immensely....*goes to read more*...****-chris

  • Blinded_Tiger On Friday, March 12, 2004, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    Ill read this one again. I like the way you write. I could decribe why, but it seem kind of pointless. The way I like it is obvius and clear in every way I think of it. Tiger

  • A former member wrote: this is beautifully savage. i dig this one! way to be!

  • Anth On Saturday, April 10, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    every line so masterful creates more and more images till you get to the end with such a vision of awe its awesome poetry

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