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Blood, Honey, and Water
By MGood
I recall the lazy whisper
Like music
To manipulate my blue lust
Stop
Then shake my shadow
Sleep bitter winter moon
Rusting beauty
Under a black garden
Use me
I am not essential
What love
A mad purple sea
Boiling with me
Scream frantic moment
Flood my sky
Leave the void
I will drive you out
Above weakness
And death
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Published on Sunday, November 5, 2000.
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Comments on "Blood, Honey, and Water"
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A former member wrote:
Great! I love it!
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A former member wrote:
a beautiful mixture; the stop stills are imperative and create both control and chaos......demands and surrenders....exquisite work, luv. blessings on the new year~
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On Sunday, September 24, 2006, Railway_Butterfly
(354)
wrote:
But I still love this. Even in these days when even inside happiness or excitement; other things are fading fast.. this still manages to cause sparks. Well done. Thank you. Please write more. I'm thirsty for people like you.
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On Sunday, September 24, 2006, Railway_Butterfly
(354) wrote:
My last comment on this piece absolutly sucked. I'm afraid I still haven't got anything better to say. I never seem to get better at this whole commeting thing.
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On Saturday, March 25, 2006, monalisamarie
(113) wrote:
oh my...this is so beautuful....
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On Friday, February 25, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(242) wrote:
a collection of words i see nicely done -kitty
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On Thursday, December 16, 2004, Sin
(1168) wrote:
this read so sleek and sensual in my head...i will have to thank Railway for suggesting this, wonderful write ~kristy
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On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Savannah
(218) wrote:
womderful... i like
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On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
i am in shock that this hasn't recieved more comments than this....there is only one thing to do to make sure this one gets noticed more...*faves*.....****-chris
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On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, manywalks
(750) wrote:
Yes, it should have gotten more thus far. Knight's comment made it catch my eye, and for that I'm gratefull, wouldn't want to misss this any longer than I have. ~ mw
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On Sunday, October 24, 2004, Railway_Butterfly
(354) wrote:
I love some of the images in this...but...I couldnt pick them out..the flow of this is so perfect,It alomst doesn't feel right to tear it apart...wonderful work...
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On Sunday, October 24, 2004, Railway_Butterfly
(354) wrote:
This feels,to me...Like real gothic poetry...it reminds me of the kind of stuff I used to read...the reason I loved this kind of poetry....im sorry...this is a really bad comment,ha
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On Thursday, June 24, 2004, glasshouse
(548) wrote:
I like this a lot. Seductive and provocative. Yet subtle and still. Great write. And may I say... you're positively beautiful, yourself. -Glass
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