If you will only let me

By aXe FactoR

hanging on heartstrings
the thin line that seperates both of us
i hope i could be...

walking on tenderhooks
literally inching my way towards your heart, one that's

cold. cool. frozen.
i'll start a fire, to melt your calloused heart
that had so carelessly left footprints in mine...

listen to me, i'll sing a song (a personal favorite),
if speech's impaired when i look at you
cos for you & only you alone i dedicate this rhapsody

a tainted armour, empty...

whose the knight sent to set me free?


let me...


break away...

to your ocean



in my eyes this armour is tainted no more

cos of you, & you alone...

if you will only let me........

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Copyright 2004 aXe_FacTor
Published on Thursday, September 23, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Revolting Theatre On Monday, October 4, 2004, Revolting Theatre (31)By person wrote:

    Loved this...only wish it was about me ;) -Josh

  • sixsixnine On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, sixsixnine (487)By person wrote:

    i felt this big time! awesome piece once again my beautiful Mel.. hard & clean!

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