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Fingerprints
By A_Puppet_Show
Under roof of forgotten promise,
Where hands still share fingerprints,
An old shaman whisper, ruin;
Alas the children listen, children listen,
The old bring promise, the old bring hope;
Benighted sky in the maladroit heart,
You made it so: can you undo whispering now?
Standing on your tower, billions scream your vow.
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Copyright 2004 Concrete Sally
Published on Wednesday, September 22, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Fingerprints"
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A former member wrote:
this is an incredible piece.your words are deep enough to drown in...
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On Saturday, April 8, 2006, Aurora_Light
(472)
wrote:
this brings a feeling of cool waves over my body, a work that speaks a thousand truths yet speaks of one alone
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
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On Wednesday, January 19, 2005, A_Puppet_Show
(166) wrote:
*admiring the dots*
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
this is very nicely written and the images permeate into my busy mind like a chanted spell--nice ;)
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
something timeless about thsi piece,as with all yours its masterfully written to its fullest effect,i especially like this one of yours,a superb poem
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Thank you, me too Anth. The first ive written for awhile im realy pleased about. It is so frustrating not to be able to say what you want, to yourself. Here I did, and damn it feels good. Thanks again.
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
ancient and cool write
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