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Prehistorical, Now
By A_Puppet_Show
Deep inside personal justification,
In a jungle where no word no,
Memory can be left inexpedient;
We dwell and sleep peacefully,
To stand up! choke our peers,
Trample on those that tremple in flight,
Tonight-tonight we break down the truth,
Of the fallen shh, sleep.
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Copyright 2004 Concrete Sally
Published on Wednesday, September 22, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, September 23, 2004, Lynaes
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wrote:
I really really wish I could elaborate.. but this is brilliant.. wonderfully different.. something one can't help put read a few times, rather than just the once. great work here.
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On Thursday, September 23, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
.. spend much time rereading this. I can't put it in plain words, but it feels lovely to be here.
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On Thursday, September 23, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
i'm finding it very hard to quantify just why i like this to the very high degree that i do... dammit; i hate it when i can't explain myself. feels like...a private yet subconsciously universal world, tiptoed through, danced within... grr. Anyway, i could
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
i like the thoughts behind this,and the style it was presented in,great work here
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
i really liked this... and your name maybe concrete sally but there was nothing concrete about this! :)
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