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Blessed/Cursed Ego
By mysticventures
Without you
I am nothing
And I am lost
Before you
I am helpless
And I am weak
Thru you
I am driven
And I am tried
Because of you
I am tortured
And I am blind
Within you
I am wizened
And I am learned
From you
I am delivered
And I am free
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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Monday, September 20, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, October 11, 2004, elisa
(1616)
wrote:
as the emotional scale tries to find a balance our feelings seem to be measured by the weight of value we place on them...the heavier the sadness the more enlightened the happiness and so on....this poem sparks a lot of thought:) elisa
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On Wednesday, October 6, 2004, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
this piece is very special to me - thanks for reading and commenting :)
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A former member wrote:
Wow...This is powerful...Thanx for sharing!!!*ScandaL*
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On Thursday, September 30, 2004, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
Truths said with such clarity and honesty. Not everyone can look so truthfully at themselves and express it so well. Nicely done.
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On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
i've missed you.. this piece is so meaningful .. like all your works are to me... this is breath taking... never stop
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, Recycled
(94) wrote:
I liked the lack of excess words. The spacing was really well used.
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A former member wrote:
Hmmm, I like this. This person must be real special to you, nicely done mystic
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A former member wrote:
Ach! Does it never end! You fill my head with positivity. But I can't keep up! My comment count multiplies alarmingly in order to keep pace. :)
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A former member wrote:
Oh, woe to the me that is me, and the responsibility to simply "be." ~Shane~
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On Monday, September 20, 2004, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
Oh Elegantkiss - you toy with me!! :)
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A former member wrote:
Nice. "Thru you i am driven" I like that line.. Or mayhaps I just like the idea of being driven through/by someone.
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On Monday, September 20, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
absolutely beautiful..traverses through pain and just lifts the spirit to some place divine!
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