[Fuck Me Tomorrow]

By Amanda Parnell

pull me back
push me harder
hold me close
then trash me tomorrow

[you'll never change
as all as you live,
this is something i
cannot give.]

love my body
hate my mind
throw my party
but leave me behind

[you'll never change
as all as you live,
this is something i
cannot give.]

tell me hello
fuck me goodbye.

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Copyright 2004 QueenKittensEyes
Published on Monday, September 20, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: this was awsome..i like it alot expecially"tell me hello, fuck me goodbye" i kno that one..great write.it was seriously kick ass ~manda~

  • A former member wrote: This is still fucking amazing.. hasn't lost a bit of its power.. I miss you being around and posting..

  • A former member wrote: I'm baaaack.. Sadly I have lost my ability to write but I am hoping I can find it here.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Thursday, November 17, 2005, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    Kick ass power write

  • Sticky Kitty On Saturday, January 29, 2005, Sticky Kitty (242)By person wrote:

    really great loved the last 2 lines -kitty

  • Sin On Friday, January 14, 2005, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    i loved this...the last two lines were just perfect

  • Angst Queen On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, Angst Queen (370)By person wrote:

    wonderful write, queenie. so many people think with the wrong mind, its heart breaking and annoying. you'll find some one that truely knows how to love someday, queen

  • Delphoid-Q On Sunday, September 26, 2004, Delphoid-Q (213)By person wrote:

    'love my body hate my mind', would that be a welcome change...

  • A former member wrote: Love the concept, and the last line. This wooshed by me by left a lingering feeling. Lovely.

  • Zhee On Monday, September 20, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    this was raw and passionate.. loved it!

  • A former member wrote: very well done i like it alot

  • Jonas On Monday, September 20, 2004, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    indeed, well done. i defer to anti-ephemeral, as (s)he sums it up

  • Anth On Monday, September 20, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    superb,so fast this felt,execution of emotion with a kind of brain surgeons precision

  • A former member wrote: intense hun....amazing

  • A former member wrote: ...and then you blew me away.

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