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THERAPY!
By Zhee
You sit scraping away
At years of gathered hurt,
Releasing the pestilent pain
From beneath the buried dirt.
Cradling the myriad pieces
Of your disintegrating soul,
Shackled hands reach out –
Pleading to make you whole
Broken will lurks within
Shadows of a defeated gaze,
As plague ridden tears set
The putrid wound ablaze.
And I watch your fall
Allured and bound awhile,
Blinded by the shards
Of your fractured smile.
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Copyright 2004 Zheala
Published on Friday, September 17, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, October 12, 2017, Sin
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wrote:
Well structured as always. Its writers like you, who perhaps don't post anymore, but your gems are still waiting to be stumbled upon, that keep me logging in and hitting the random button. Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
understand the empathy sweety but, if you still are studying to be a therapist of the mind and emotions let this feeling go. You will not be able to fix them all....sometimes some work better broken.
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On Friday, October 8, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
your potrayal here is excellent. lovely write
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On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Well done indeed, excellent most beautiful work. Great great job! ~Kirsten~
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On Friday, September 17, 2004, cre
(411) wrote:
I enjoyed this . . it rings true . . and the rhyme was very well-done . . great job.
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A former member wrote:
Agreed! Never look a dead corpse in the mouth!
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A former member wrote:
I was impressed by your rhyme Zhee. An ability I wish I could improve upon.
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A former member wrote:
Cradling the myriad pieces
Of your disintegrating soul,
Shackled hands reach out –
Pleading to make you whole ... hell yeah, sublime flow with an ironic aura... like your style.
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