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No Sound
By SilverPagan
Tears falling
Siently calling
Out loudly
Without a sound
Skin opening
Tearing, Ripping
Blood dripping
Silent screams
No one hears
As these tears
Mingle
Saline mixes
With the
Blood as
It pools
Cools
As life
Passes
Flashes
Gone.
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Copyright 2004 'SilverPagan' - Jessica Poole
Published on Tuesday, September 14, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "No Sound"
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On Thursday, September 16, 2004, purr_verse
(1059)
wrote:
effective formatting here; nice rhythm shifts bring a rapid desparation to this piece. fine write! welcome to dp. :)
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A former member wrote:
wow, awesome write, captivating...took me in.
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On Tuesday, September 14, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
captivating flow and imagery--minimalist wording with powerful expression--great! welcome to DP ;)
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On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, SilverPagan
(24) wrote:
Thank you.
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