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Tragedy Cries
By Mistress Morbid
Sweet seasoned tears
coated her eyes that day
a swollen slippery mess
the nile came crashing
down her puffed cheeks
slowly drenching her garments
and flooding the floor around her
petals of a rose glide
down to the ground to
greet the ever so growing nile
-these tears were wept for you-
She loves me...
She loves me not...
She loves me...
She loves me not...
....She loves me
She......loves me not....
-these petals crumble for you-
as she is submerged in
a warm sea salty water
the stem of the desolate rose
floats to the top of the water
to dance with renewed life
as the girl is left to the depths
of the sea
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Copyright 2004 Broken
Published on Monday, September 13, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Tragedy Cries"
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A former member wrote:
Great Poem
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On Thursday, December 16, 2004, AHHH
(187)
wrote:
wow. amazing.
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On Friday, November 26, 2004, blue
(1454) wrote:
i really love the ending, i'm not sure if i should feel sad or uplifted...curious.
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On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
purifying.. i really feel this piece..
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On Tuesday, September 21, 2004, Whisper
(112) wrote:
The description in this write is superb. The flow is elegant, and the wording is perfect. ~Whisper~
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On Monday, September 20, 2004, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
the imagery wrought with your wording is so vivid, making the sadness of this even more intense. Yet the ending hints at a maybe positive. nicely done
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A former member wrote:
Glory be, the emotion this stirred!
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On Tuesday, September 14, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
I dont know what this reminds me of, something to do with the sea, but it feels repressed, like searching for truths behind silken shrouds...Searching for love within silver clouds, all silver lining...
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On Tuesday, September 14, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Silver is a good thing =D
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On Tuesday, September 14, 2004, Twilight
(1786) wrote:
hmmm
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