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fuck
By KittyStryker
we don't
make love
anymore
it feels like
what we really do
is reinforce
our dislike
never about
pleasure
anymore
about you
getting off
and me
wanting
to get away
i don't feel sexy
just used
disposable
undone
and broken
what used to make me
scream
with ecstacy
now just makes me cry
quietly
when i think you aren't looking
luckily
i suppose
for our shattered relationship
you never are.
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Copyright 2004 Bast
Published on Sunday, September 12, 2004.
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A former member wrote:
Well written. Very sad though.
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On Thursday, November 13, 2014, soul_versing
(882)
wrote:
This brought tears to my eyes because I've been in this situation before. Powerful read, love, powerful read.
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On Sunday, October 7, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(303) wrote:
How have I never read this poem before?? This is incredible! It's sad but man, it is just....I love how poetry allows us to express these emotions in concise perfect words.
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On Saturday, August 28, 2010, FallenFaith
(44) wrote:
Hey poem of the day may 4th 2010 alright. I'm kinda hoping this comment notification gets sent to your email as it doesnt appear as you spend much time round these parts anymore
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A former member wrote:
this is true, and quite sad. great write.
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A former member wrote:
this is so sad so beautiful i cant even describe how much i love these words and hate the feeling
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A former member wrote:
i love how poetry helps u not burry things like that...nice i like this alot one of my favorites on this site
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On Wednesday, March 11, 2009, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
i've felt this so many times but have been too much of a punk to admit it.....even to myself!!! bravo!!
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On Monday, August 8, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(242) wrote:
You're amazing. -Kitty
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On Friday, June 3, 2005, peril_notion
(88) wrote:
wow.... no amount of words can describe the emotions flowing through me at this very moment. wonderful write. ~Heather
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On Wednesday, May 25, 2005, Sin
(1168) wrote:
ouch...damn his hurt
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On Wednesday, March 2, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
wow....this breaks my heart, its simply that good!! Keep up the good stuff!
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On Saturday, February 12, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(242) wrote:
heart wrenching made me want to curl up and cry or drown in a bathtub loved this -kitty
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On Monday, January 24, 2005, CorruptedLittleGirl
(253) wrote:
This is incredible. I can relate, but I wish I couldn't. You deserve so much better than this.
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A former member wrote:
this is so good, says so much with few words....one of my faves.
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A former member wrote:
I think that if I could put my previous relationships downfall into words it would have come out similar to this.
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On Tuesday, December 7, 2004, Black_Cherry_Doll_
(69) wrote:
OMG, these words just hit home so much!!:( u r really talented, hope to find more of ur works!!---steph
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On Saturday, October 16, 2004, FallenFaith
(44) wrote:
omg that is true.I have felt this so many times, even being a guy. Wow, I like this. _favorite_
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, cre
(411) wrote:
=( poetically speaking . . you are a master at that final phrase that always leaves me in a sort of verbal double-take. Wonderfully written . . but kitty . . *worries*.
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, cre
(411) wrote:
I
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Dont hurt yourself kitty, damnit.
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On Friday, September 17, 2004, Invader Lyn
(48) wrote:
Hah. It never ends happily does it? I can relate to every single fucking (pun intended?) word in this amazing write. Well done Bast.
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On Monday, September 13, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
Oh man.. this really is familiar. it's shocking to read something that's so close to home.. you've worded this perfectly. I'm sorry for your pain, this killed me. Amazing work.
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On Monday, September 13, 2004, Mademoiselle_Minx
(108) wrote:
Oh dear Kitty...But I thought you said this time would be different?...DP mail me if you wish to talk because I do know EXACTLY how you feel xx
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A former member wrote:
frighteningly familiar...I can cure the ills here, can you cure them there? If not, knowing how horrible this feeling is, I tell you to run as fast as you can in the opposite direction from whoever....even if it's yourself you're running from...
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On Monday, September 13, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
*hug* heartbreaking. awesomely powerful write.
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On Monday, September 13, 2004, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
*Sighs*. Why, Kitty? I can't stand to see you like this again... You have my e-mail address - I suggest you start using it again. *Kisses*.
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On Sunday, September 12, 2004, Exodus
(172) wrote:
very nice...love the last stanza....it flat rocks....very powerful..
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On Sunday, September 12, 2004, darkangelXlll
(108) wrote:
short and simple but overloaded with emotions that arent the best. great write. ~darlin :)
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A former member wrote:
lovely....and unfortunately..quite true for alot of people.
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On Sunday, September 12, 2004, Revolting Theatre
(31) wrote:
...nice write.
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On Sunday, September 12, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
the second verse i found most impacting here,...obvious to qoute that you deserve more,your poems as painful wisdom to me
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On Sunday, September 12, 2004, elisa
(1616) wrote:
ouch...i have a matching scar to this poem...when the point is lost in the purpose,it's like being a ghost in your own relationship...very well expressed. elisa
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On Sunday, September 12, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
this was heart wrenching..
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On Sunday, September 12, 2004, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
I could feel your words chipping at my heart...Kitty...you deserve much better than you subject yourself to. Hopefully you'll realize that...
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On Sunday, September 12, 2004, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
wow
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On Monday, September 13, 2004, Dayer
(162) wrote:
ditto
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On Sunday, September 12, 2004, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
time to go!!!
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