fragile angel (with aegis)
By darkangelXlll
as you sit there in your corner
so delicate
so fragile
your wings are slowly loosing their charm
and are rapidly deatching from your skin
so lovely
i wish i could just briefly
pass my hand through your hair
as it bows by the wind
like touching the most beautiful silk
your heart was as glass
...easily broken
your tears were sliding down your face
and vanished as they hit the floor
every single one of them carried their own story
their own pain
their own misery
you looked up and saw me
your eyes where yelling help
i ran to you to comfort you
but all i saw...
was your departure.
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Copyright 2004 darkangelXlll
Published on Friday, September 10, 2004.
Filed under:
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Comments on "fragile angel (with aegis)"
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On Saturday, July 28, 2012, RibbonHeart
(22) wrote:
Beautiful, haunting and lovely. Very well written :)
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A former member wrote:
beutiful
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On Sunday, September 12, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
this was wonderully written....
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On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Munkey
(79) wrote:
Wow...amazing. Keep it dark. -Chance-
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On Friday, September 17, 2004, Dayer
(162) wrote:
my thoughts exactly awesome write
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On Saturday, September 11, 2004, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
this read with such a quiet tenderness and sadness to it. The title fits it very well. Your talents blended together nicely. Lovely write
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On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
you really capture a great mood in this,it was like a scene from a movie, much emotion and action,superb work
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On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Rachel
(213) wrote:
This is wonderful. The imagery is amazing. I could actually see this happening. I actually felt like it was happening to me. Great job here.
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A former member wrote:
this was beautiful. the descriptions were to die for. a few spelling errors (you might want to fix them)..overall it was gorgiously written.
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A former member wrote:
:o:o:o:o:o:o:o ALRIGHT...i officially love this poem.
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On Friday, September 10, 2004, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
poignant piece!
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On Friday, September 10, 2004, darkangelXlll
(108) wrote:
i want to thank aegis again for helping me write this poem i really liked how everything fell one into the other thank you. O:)