In my dreams

By mysticventures





In my dreams

there are riches

and these riches are bountiful


In my dreams

there is passion

and this passion is fulfilled


In my dreams

there is love

and this love is eternal


In my dreams

there is peace

and this peace is everlasting


In my dreams

there is hope

that all my dreams come true

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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Friday, September 10, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • maggot death On Thursday, January 14, 2010, maggot death (62)By person wrote:

    Good write. I agree about what you say about dreams, and i am glad that someone is FINALLY writing about it :) Keep writing!

  • Jonas On Monday, May 23, 2005, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    all sweetly optimistic... took me off guard, thanks for the smile.

  • A former member wrote: Hum a true poet your are. I love how the last two lines completes the poem so firmly. well done

  • Sin On Saturday, January 15, 2005, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    beautiful and hopeful....what a lovely dream ~kristy

  • NikesRain On Thursday, September 30, 2004, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    this is just absolutely lovely in the extreme. Gods I hope your dreams come true for you also. How beautiful if we all could attain these things. How blissful would the world be? Great job

  • sixsixnine On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    you always soothe my soul with your words.. i've not been able to get on lately do to a bunch of bullshit.. but it's always a treat to read your poetry.. thanx ~matt

  • A former member wrote: We should all be blessed with such dreams for they are beautiful!

  • DarkWolf On Sunday, September 12, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    Beautifully written Mystical One. A very lovely work. -Michael

  • A former member wrote: Very simple yet very clear and well spoken.

  • TheLastDragon On Saturday, September 11, 2004, TheLastDragon (69)By person wrote:

    The only thing we have control over is hope. When pandora opened the box given to her, everything except hope escaped to wreak havoc. Hope is still ours for when we need it, but it must be consciously used. Nicely done.

  • A former member wrote: cute. this is a twist from the usual. nicely done.

  • ONEANDLONELY On Friday, September 10, 2004, ONEANDLONELY (117)By person wrote:

    Hope is eternal...

  • A former member wrote: I hope you find your dreams come true.

  • A former member wrote: I hope for that everyday, also at the same time with all this war crap going on sort of sucks that piece is no where to be found. Awesome write, I like the way this makes you think.

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