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Triste son las palabras...- dos-
By Spiritus_Frumenti
There's something beautiful,
About thunderstorms in the night
Sounds that light the skies
As the rain falls and slithers down my window
Almost hoping it can last forever
These moments where nature embraces
Wanting to give my soul away
And ask it to tell me its secrets and desires
But this cannot be,
And as much as those drops
Seem like the skies stretching its arms
To feel my pain,
They are not warm like tears
And the clouds above are much too far away...
Copyright © Juan Antonìo Thomas, 2004
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
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Copyright 2004 Spiritus_Frumenti
Published on Thursday, September 9, 2004.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Triste son las palabras...- dos-"
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On Wednesday, May 11, 2011, Virgils Vigil
(75)
wrote:
Great poem
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On Sunday, November 25, 2007, Mari
(425) wrote:
you make me want to feel.
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A former member wrote:
Your writes are so evocative...and this one, brought tears to my eyes...I know this poem so well. That is such a good feeling.
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On Monday, September 13, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
stunning write; beautiful and gutwrenching, wistful and real. just divine.
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On Monday, September 13, 2004, shadowsinthelight
(146) wrote:
You are a true dark poet. S.
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On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
I felt the atmosphere of this so precisely.. maybe because it's something that a lot of people have experienced, the surrounds the emotions... this really is superb, amazing work. I wish I could say more.
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On Friday, September 10, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
superb,as always i expect from you,each time you capture me in the moments you express so sublimely
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On Thursday, September 9, 2004, TheLastDragon
(69) wrote:
Esta muy bien! Me gusta el sentimiento detrás la poema.
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A former member wrote:
Six-out sent this to me in an AIM conversation. I am forever glad he did. I'm speechless. I know not what to say that would dignify this piece. I must put this on my favourites. It's beautiful. Like piercing the heart with a pin three feet long. =-MO-=
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On Thursday, September 9, 2004, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
I don't think I've ever before felt so much from so little...I don't know what it is about this...the imagery...the realness...it's you...raw. Just great...that's all I can say.
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