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LEWY BODY DISEASE
By Zhee
Fervently blindness consumes
The specter mangled within,
Crippled, thrust in the chasms
Scarring the furrowed skin.
Unleashed demonic voices
Void the repressed profanity,
Wailing, lash out burning
The last sentinels of sanity.
Mutated the visions feast
Upon fear tainted screams,
Slashed, blood splattered walls
Painted in empty dreams.
Drained the bottle pirouettes
Empty where the idol stands,
Brittle, life slipping through
The weary tremulous hands…
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Copyright 2004 Zheala
Published on Wednesday, September 8, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "LEWY BODY DISEASE"
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On Friday, October 8, 2004, Angst Queen
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wrote:
eerie and not something i want to mess with
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A former member wrote:
I've never heard of this disease, but am grateful you have enlightened me. It seemed a cross between Tourette's Syndrome & Parkinson's disease combined.
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A former member wrote:
eerily painted though i really liked it, extremely well done...impressive
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, TheLastDragon
(69) wrote:
A powerful disease, with a matching poem.
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, girlafraid
(480) wrote:
i've heard of this disease somewhere in my studies...but no textbook could have described what you have captured here. what a devastating loss...the fragility of the mind and body is terrifying.
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
the imagery in this is brilliant,and heightened by the way its written
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Dayer
(162) wrote:
very good writing :)
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
very very good...rhyme lovely, not forced. excellent content. -Syn
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