Perpetuation (In The End)

By Syn

I wake to another cold day
crimson skies have to turned to grey
As morning shed I pray to stay
and not forsake my life astray

I wake again to an empty home
walls screaming yet Im alone
dead dial tone on the phone
death upon my countenance grown

I wake again to live these lies
and claw my way into my disguise
But in the end we lose our cries
as our souls bleed and willfully die

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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Wednesday, September 8, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Kinkypoptart On Sunday, April 24, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Great write.. Perpetuation is my favorite word... hehehe ~*~Tart~*~

  • Silent Assassin On Wednesday, December 15, 2004, Silent Assassin (108)By person wrote:

    Wow...just...wow, I loved this one very much. The flow of everything in here was perfect. Nothing less. Incredible write!

  • A former member wrote: great constructe, nice form, content, and word manipulation...yes i do believe i've been missing out here, i'll have to read more of you.

  • A former member wrote: nicely constructed

  • DarkWolf On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    The last line is the best.. "as our souls bleed and willfully die" thats just cool. -Michael

  • Zhee On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    beautifully written.. your really captured the pain of loneliness..

  • Dayer On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Dayer (162)By person wrote:

    loved the ending, nice write :)

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