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Breathe
By Syn
So close I feel
though I know we're worlds apart
if I could bridge this distance
Id lay my heart
to tie our souls
if only to be so pure again
lose myself in you again
if I could feel myself again
Id take strong hold
and never bid you go
Breathe into me
Resurrect me
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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Monday, September 6, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, September 6, 2004, DarkWolf
(415)
wrote:
Lovely. Romantic, sad and beautiful. Nike is right, the last two lines are deeply seductive. Love this work. -Michael
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A former member wrote:
I can relate. Though I wish there was more. Maybe it's better this way though... you long for more words yet resurrection itself symbolizes an ending with hope.
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On Monday, September 6, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
beautiful--simply beautiful and heart wrenching perfection
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On Monday, September 6, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
lovely write; the conclusion is especially beautiful. :)
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On Monday, September 6, 2004, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
simply powerful in its love!
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On Monday, September 6, 2004, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
absolutely beautiful and touching, so deeply. This radiates with pure intense heartfelt emotion. Great write.
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On Monday, September 6, 2004, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
and damn it those last two lines are seductive as hell
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On Monday, September 6, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
:) Thank you -Syn
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