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Make Me Believe!
By Zhee
In the abyss of confusion,
In the void of despair,
The anarchy is painted
In the emptiness I wear.
The face of faith
Is but a reflection to deceive,
Come you god forsaken pagan
And make me believe...
Where the skies rain
With blatant lies,
Where mirages of truth
Play tricks on my eyes..
Where all the words lost
You cannot retrieve,
Come you god damn liar
And make me believe...
From the images of Satan,
To the blood of clans,
From the desecration of God
To the decay of man...
Lost in this blind dogma-
This madness you perceive,
Come you god defiling demon
And make me believe...
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Copyright 2004 Zheala
Published on Monday, August 23, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Make Me Believe!"
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On Friday, October 8, 2004, Angst Queen
(370)
wrote:
i don't think i could say anything here that all others have not...incredible work
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On Thursday, September 9, 2004, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
I really liked this... a lot... a whole lot. Very nice.
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On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Dayer
(162) wrote:
likewise, what shadow said :)
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A former member wrote:
Have you read my 'Damned Deviled Ham' (#1) poem? It might make your karma run over your dogma! Don't chase me down w/your damned pitchfork, PLEASE! ~Shane~
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A former member wrote:
I was just listening to a song about the title you gave to this poem... Nice. *Lilith*
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On Monday, August 23, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
very well written in structure, rhyme and content--I really felt your expression here
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A former member wrote:
I don't think I am "god defiling demon" but for some reason I keep thinking this poem was to me.
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On Monday, August 23, 2004, Soulseeker
(108) wrote:
I agree that this is well thought out with many emotions showing in and almost something I screamed at my English teacher today actually. How ironic! Bethany
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On Monday, August 23, 2004, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
yes, I like this alot - well written and well thought out!
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