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Fire, Fire
By mysticventures
Fire, fire
My desire
Wanton lust
My emotions mire
Fire, fire
My desire
Fueling rage
That ignites my ire
Fire, fire
My desire
Burns inside
Like a funeral pyre
Fire, fire
My desire
Satiate me
And quell the fire
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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Sunday, August 22, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Fire, Fire"
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A former member wrote:
very nice write...i love it!!!
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Dayer
(162)
wrote:
ooh I loves this :)
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A former member wrote:
Hmmm. Is this a staement on carnal desires or the seracg for greater awareness? Either way very well done.
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A former member wrote:
my element being that of fire, lol. I really likes this write. FIRE FIRE!!!!, lol.
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On Tuesday, August 24, 2004, ONEANDLONELY
(117) wrote:
If we could quench it, would we cease to exist?
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On Monday, August 23, 2004, Munkey
(79) wrote:
I'm kinda a pyro so I like this poem on two levels it's just that one could land me 10 years in jail. Oh well it would be fun anyway ;) -Munkey-
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On Sunday, August 22, 2004, elisa
(1616) wrote:
Fueling the poetry fires:) Burning Hot! elisa
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On Sunday, August 22, 2004, TheReap
(38) wrote:
*hands mystic a fire extinguisher* - lol - just kidding - nice!
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On Sunday, August 22, 2004, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
thanks Mr Meat - but there's alot more where that came from!
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A former member wrote:
Hey Mystic, this is HOTTER THAN HELL! Ya know this is the very first poem I've read of yours except for the Dr. Seuss poem. Turn up the heat!
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On Sunday, August 22, 2004, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
the keyword here is 'quell' - not to be mistaken with 'quench' which is simply not possible!
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