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(Perhaps this is the truth)
By Soulseeker
To hold a heart....
takes absolute trust...
To break a heart....
the bubble must bust....
So with this being said I will now scream:
A crule, sad world is the relaity of my life...
nothing is how I dreamed or how I planned..
What is the point of hopes and dreams
if we are ment to stand helplessly by
and watch them wither and die?
The are filling our mouth with dust,
dust of our lives
until we choke slowly and fade ourselves into
the nothing that we are......
that we have ALWAYS been......
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Copyright 2004 Soulseeker
Published on Saturday, August 21, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296)
wrote:
life is simply put; survival...everything else is just entertainment
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On Saturday, September 4, 2004, Sleepwalker
(15) wrote:
We are only on this earth for a short while...then we return to dust. Great write.
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On Friday, August 27, 2004, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
truth soaked in despair......this road i walk too......you have spoken well........urban
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A former member wrote:
I agree w/everyone here. ~Shane~
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On Saturday, August 21, 2004, Soulseeker
(108) wrote:
For the record the first lines are what made me think of the rest.... Something I am going through I guess... Hell! I'm just a kid *wink*
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On Saturday, August 21, 2004, Loneal
(86) wrote:
Perhaps we are as the line goes: "from ashes to ashes, dust to dust." But despite our origins or our final destination, we exist through life. Plans go astray, dreams aren't always achieved, but we exist.
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On Saturday, August 21, 2004, Loneal
(86) wrote:
The trick is learning how best to react to such pitfalls. I'm figuring that one out myself. ;) Very honest write, altogether - keep it up! :) ~L
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A former member wrote:
very nice...interesting too.
good job
-namelez
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On Saturday, August 21, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
interesting expresson--I can relate to the introspective themes you are focusing on here--I dont really get how the beginning ties in--but the second stanza is very powerful
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