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linger
By mysticventures
these days I linger
a tormented soul
and long for that
which makes me whole
these day I wonder
thru the corridors of my mind
and long for the escape
I might never find
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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Sunday, August 15, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, August 15, 2004, sixsixnine
(477)
wrote:
absolutely brutal... i'm left puzzled but in peace with this feeling.. you're so extreamly talented.. never stop ~matt
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On Sunday, August 15, 2004, elisa
(1616) wrote:
A balance of hope and longing. very beautiful:) elisa
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On Sunday, August 15, 2004, Storm
(143) wrote:
soft indeed.. got the waves of someone who silently surrenders but keeps the hope of one day finding all the missing pieces. Soft and calm...
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On Sunday, August 15, 2004, manywalks
(750) wrote:
This flows soft through the mind, like a whisper nearly lost. Wonderful. ~ wen
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On Sunday, August 15, 2004, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
thanks for the correction krystal
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On Sunday, August 15, 2004, GirlintheBox
(41) wrote:
i like it...but only one thing is confusing me...when u say "these day", do u mean "this day" or "these days"? jw...great piece tho *krystal*
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On Sunday, August 15, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
love it! flow is like an undertow that swept me right through this piece...and swept this piece right through me--nicely done
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