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musings
By GirlintheBox
*Another one of those works from my tender 12th year*
everyday i watch as
life passes me by
i grasp a hold
it slips through my fingers
it is carried away by the wind
my hopes cannot crash
there's none here to do so
they've already been shattered
and are now mere
memories
memories
it's all i have
all i wish to forget
they consume me
detatch me from
reality
reality
why would anyone want to be
attatched
to an endless void of
insignificance
why can't i be the same
as all the other
mindless
sickingly happy
stereotypical
*individuals*
instead i am
trapped away
different
alone
im in a box
with chains and locks
i can't escape
nobody can enter
i am destined to remain alone
forever
alone
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Copyright 2004 Krystal Bray
Published on Wednesday, August 11, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2005, Lord Kalgalath
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wrote:
well done, and who wants to be one of those stereotypical happy folk, if it means being a slave, following the trends and such like a sheep.
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On Wednesday, August 11, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
I like this piece a lot. I think people who write on this level at such a young age are old souls. Parts of me remember what it was like to feel like this--very nice, clear expression
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A former member wrote:
i would have to agree with Solace. haha. being alone is very fun, usually. nicely written though. awesome work.
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On Wednesday, August 11, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Being alone is fun...
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On Wednesday, August 11, 2004, Whisper
(112) wrote:
A very sad poem :( but Ilike it. Antoher great piece. ~Whisper~
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