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Assonance
By GirlintheBox
I'm a slave to the pain
And it won't fade away
I stay and pray and wait to be sane
You'll see me on me knees
As I plead for release
And decree the need to be free from your greed
Then I will fly high
Right into the sky
I'll fight for my life and I'll try to survive
The cold that has hold
Of my soul and I know
That I should just go but I'm being contolled by
You
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Copyright 2004 Krystal Bray
Published on Tuesday, August 10, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, September 5, 2012, creature
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wrote:
Very nice, the gain and loss of control, with means to free the spirit and with the use of a partner. Beautiful.
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On Thursday, August 12, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
very effective pounding slow beat to this, like a mantra almost, internal chant... the first stanza is my favourite. :) fine write!
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On Sunday, August 22, 2004, Munkey
(79) wrote:
A mantra is what I would called it yes yes it would it would, beautiful thank you for sharing. -Munkey-
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