Bl(o)(o)d R(a)ins

By Syn

drown you in blood
pours from the goblet as wine
dripping down
slow, ever so slow
tongue lapping
yearning for it
mistckal bathing
basking in it's crimson warmth
trance hypnotic
eyes fixated on you
soaking into your pale succulent skin
puddling around
your rhythmic feet
crossing in the pool
with this tribal dance

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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Monday, August 9, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: wow

  • DarkWolf On Friday, September 3, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    I found this morbid and erotic. Fantastic work. -Michael

  • A former member wrote: 'trance hypnotic' Temptuos & seductive; nice beat... well done.

  • manywalks On Monday, August 9, 2004, manywalks (750)By person wrote:

    Mmmm, yes indeed, a seductive little number this is. ~ mw

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