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And Nothing Lasts Forever
By mysticventures
I've seen the writing on the wall
Ancient handprints -
Large and small
Echo's of souls -
Hear them call
Of ages past -
Rise and fall
Faded pictures -
Tell it all
I've seen the writing on the wall
And I know that -
Nothing
Lasts
Forever
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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Sunday, August 8, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "And Nothing Lasts Forever"
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A former member wrote:
"Echo's of souls hear them call of ages past rise and fall" God I love that verse, once again, awesome piece. I especially like how it flows.
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On Thursday, August 19, 2004, DarkWolf
(415)
wrote:
Kind of Ominous.. I have to disagree with the ending though. ::grins:: You write excellent stuff Mystic. -Michael
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On Sunday, August 8, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
ahhh-this one is so simply and beautiful written--the flow and word choice is so on point--this piece has a lot of finesse--I love it
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A former member wrote:
I really like the simplicity to this, it is so purely written awesome
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On Sunday, August 8, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus
(140) wrote:
no, nothing lasts forever. even the happy times disappear when faced with evil. A_C
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On Sunday, August 8, 2004, Whisper
(112) wrote:
Thise is a wicked write. ~Whisper~
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On Sunday, August 8, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
yeah,its something that can be hard to grasp sometimes,the thought of it, superbly expressed here.great flow
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On Sunday, August 8, 2004, girlafraid
(480) wrote:
i liked the simplicity on such a prfound subject...a simple truth that one must have a keen awareness to understand...
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On Sunday, August 8, 2004, glasshouse
(548) wrote:
I liked this piece a lot. The flow was original and you made it your own. The message is universal. Sad but glorious in its truth. Elegant words here. Good work hun. -Glass
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