eclipse

By sixsixnine

..this is just a test to see if this works..
..just gonna fuck around 'til it hurts..
..say whatever just bursts..

i'm thinking again of you my friend..
i'm falling right in..
i'm becoming sin..
dying with everything

you are always making me feel
the spinning of lifes wheel..
you're a test that makes me real..
you are my purgatory.. cleansing
so many things only evil brings

you know the feeling of love stings
but you're my lifes favriot meaning

i'm dreaming

i grab you
you hold me

i suck you
you eat me

i make you mine
you make me shine

you are the sun
i am the moon

with you i'll be with soon
you took me out of doom
to put me in your room
where stars bloom

i know before i was such a whore
i don't know how me you came to adore

your light was just to fucking bright
but tonight with you i feel so right
my soul ressurects & with yours takes flight
you've given my love new sight




******669******

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Copyright 2004 sixsixnine matthew parkey II *669*
Published on Friday, August 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • sixsixnine On Thursday, October 7, 2004, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    thanx capt. & sex & mys yhou know i'm stoked by what you said.,.

  • capt_funguy On Sunday, August 8, 2004, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    love your "hit the ground running , manic adventures " , like ... this blank page has seconds to live , and the hardcore sex always lends itself well ...lol .... stay freaked man ... funguy

  • mysticventures On Saturday, August 7, 2004, mysticventures (538)By person wrote:

    hey - simply beautiful - I feel you!!!

  • sixsixnine On Friday, August 6, 2004, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    thanx griffin & whisper.. i'll be checking yours out right now *669*

  • Whisper On Friday, August 6, 2004, Whisper (112)By person wrote:

    Nice!!! me likes it ~Whisper~

  • Griffin On Friday, August 6, 2004, Griffin (114)By person wrote:

    yay! first to comment, its really good, ill have to read mroe of you

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