AA

By Lord Kalgalath

Get a bottle,
Crawl inside,
Such a cozy place,
When you want to hide,
Pull the cap back
Never leave

Drown my sorrows
Flood my fears
Come back out
In a few long years

Look around
Nothings changed
Same damn people
Still deranged

Crawl back then
Comfort lies within


Wash away the cares
In an amber flood


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Copyright 2004 Bestrafer Engel
Published on Wednesday, August 4, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Intoxicating Delirium On Tuesday, December 22, 2015, Intoxicating Delirium (275)By person wrote:

    I love how simple and complex this is at the same time.. Great write :)

  • Clementine On Thursday, April 19, 2007, Clementine (121)By person wrote:

    i just need to comment again, this is still crap

  • Mr King On Monday, July 11, 2005, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    your clarity and use of visual imagery is astounding... 1, Seth

  • murder_in_clubland On Friday, May 27, 2005, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    I like this alot,I can relate and so can alot of other people thanks! I love this~xXx

  • A former member wrote: this had a really good flow to it ~~GOTHIC~~

  • Angst Queen On Saturday, December 11, 2004, Angst Queen (370)By person wrote:

    you write very well. i like this and i've seen this happen

  • JiNx On Sunday, August 22, 2004, JiNx (98)By person wrote:

    I really like this write. *JiNx*

  • Malice In Wonderland On Friday, August 20, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    Very nice write Devon, This was emotional and to the point... Kya Scholar

  • nell On Tuesday, August 10, 2004, nell (271)By person wrote:

    i liked it mucho....funny how this is the exact reason people go to AA lol

  • A former member wrote: The emotion behind this is evident. Intense write.

  • SilentStalker On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, SilentStalker (1067)By person wrote:

    ...for not having a consistent rhyme, I must say I actually enjoy reading your work here...and that's no sugar coat...lol...nicely done... -Darun Scholar

  • Dommi On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, Dommi (96)By person wrote:

    i thought it was quite nicely done.. you dont give yourself enough credit devon. hehe good job.

  • NikesRain On Thursday, August 26, 2004, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    I agree with Dommi, you write very well, As with this. Nicely done

  • A former member wrote: I liked it. Make mine a Natural Brew Root Beer.

  • GirlintheBox On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, GirlintheBox (41)By person wrote:

    love it love it love it *krystal*

  • Clementine On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, Clementine (121)By person wrote:

    id rather drink kerosene

  • Lord Kalgalath On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (182)By person wrote:

    kerosens has more of a kick to it...but then you have the whole sickness from petroleum products.... not fun

  • Anth On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    this is a good write man,heh i liked the last part,but the poem is what it is,the meanings are apparant in its style,an so i need say no more other than its a good work

  • Whisper On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, Whisper (112)By person wrote:

    I like this write. -BT-

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