AA
By Lord Kalgalath
Get a bottle,
Crawl inside,
Such a cozy place,
When you want to hide,
Pull the cap back
Never leave
Drown my sorrows
Flood my fears
Come back out
In a few long years
Look around
Nothings changed
Same damn people
Still deranged
Crawl back then
Comfort lies within
Wash away the cares
In an amber flood
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
Copyright 2004 Bestrafer Engel
Published on Wednesday, August 4, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, December 22, 2015, Intoxicating Delirium
(275) wrote:
I love how simple and complex this is at the same time.. Great write :)
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On Thursday, April 19, 2007, Clementine
(121) wrote:
i just need to comment again, this is still crap
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On Monday, July 11, 2005, Mr King
(547) wrote:
your clarity and use of visual imagery is astounding... 1, Seth
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On Friday, May 27, 2005, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
I like this alot,I can relate and so can alot of other people thanks! I love this~xXx
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A former member wrote:
this had a really good flow to it ~~GOTHIC~~
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On Saturday, December 11, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
you write very well. i like this and i've seen this happen
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On Sunday, August 22, 2004, JiNx
(98) wrote:
I really like this write. *JiNx*
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On Friday, August 20, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
Very nice write Devon, This was emotional and to the point... Kya
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On Tuesday, August 10, 2004, nell
(271) wrote:
i liked it mucho....funny how this is the exact reason people go to AA lol
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A former member wrote:
The emotion behind this is evident. Intense write.
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, SilentStalker
(1067) wrote:
...for not having a consistent rhyme, I must say I actually enjoy reading your work here...and that's no sugar coat...lol...nicely done... -Darun
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, Dommi
(96) wrote:
i thought it was quite nicely done.. you dont give yourself enough credit devon. hehe good job.
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On Thursday, August 26, 2004, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
I agree with Dommi, you write very well, As with this. Nicely done
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A former member wrote:
I liked it. Make mine a Natural Brew Root Beer.
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, GirlintheBox
(41) wrote:
love it love it love it *krystal*
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, Clementine
(121) wrote:
id rather drink kerosene
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
kerosens has more of a kick to it...but then you have the whole sickness from petroleum products.... not fun
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
this is a good write man,heh i liked the last part,but the poem is what it is,the meanings are apparant in its style,an so i need say no more other than its a good work
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, Whisper
(112) wrote:
I like this write. -BT-