Crimson Feelings

By GirlintheBox

Swept away in a multitude
Crimson feelings
So long kept secretly
buried within tombs of my soul

He's set me free

Dragged away by the current
Till shore is gone
Lost in a sea of
Love that pulls me under

He's drowning me

My head under water
Gasp for life
Lungs filled with his
Love, it's overwhelming

He's killing me

Swept away by the multitude
Crimson feelings
My life's been placed
Beside the tombs of my soul

He's buried me





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Copyright 2004 Krystal Bray
Published on Wednesday, August 4, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Reminded me of Douglas Adams. Or Poseidon. Thanks for all the fish!

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Thursday, August 5, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    Lovely flow to this piece - I also like the ending very much, soul buried, but you, apparently, live on without it. Nice imagery! Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • A former member wrote: I like your style of writing. good write and welcome to Dp. ~serpentine~ Scholar

  • Blood of Winter On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, Blood of Winter (296)By person wrote:

    I like the way it degraded to a kind of it's already done feeling...

  • A former member wrote: great write girl, i can relate to crimson feelings :)

  • Whisper On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, Whisper (112)By person wrote:

    I like this right. I haven't read anything like this in awhile. -BT-

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