A True Heart Break
By Angel With The Scabbed Wings
To depict the emotions I felt,
wouldn’t amount to what I dealt.
She was nothing less of divine,
Her intelligents far surpassed mine.
From everything I knew of,
I knew it was true love.
How beautiful and fulfilling it was,
My dream girl loves me, she does.
The Passion laced sins,
produced those subtle dirty grins.
She understood why I would live in a cave,
just to get away form all the human slaves.
Now that we where connected,
what happened next was unexpected.
It was our fate to be separated,
After than moment I only felt sedated.
A month has passed since that time,
sadly enough she’s become a mime.
Our love has ran itself stale,
My lifeless body is so pale.
Suicide tickles her mind,
just leaving me in a tight bind.
Losing touch with reality
with a lonesome mentality.
As she drifts so far away,
I have no idea what to say.
The pain of her absence begins to set in,
I find this is no game I can win.
Talking to her again
Only drives me insane.
Now I know it must come to an end,
I have no more sorrow to spend.
“Good Bye†I sadly say
what a dark, dark day.
Now I will forever pay, what I cherish most is gone and I am left as a
cold shell waiting waiting to be cracked.
It takes true love to create a true heart break.
This is what pain I feel.
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Comments on "A True Heart Break"
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On Tuesday, July 5, 2005, SorrowSoul
(54) wrote:
Amazing. All of that I can relate to everyday of my life. Great write!!
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A former member wrote:
"It takes true love to create a true heart break." beautiful
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On Thursday, August 5, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335) wrote:
the flow of this piece was great...one of the finer poems ive came across tdy...full with emotions. excellent. -MeL-
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On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, Soulseeker
(108) wrote:
One of the best I have read on pain. Great flow! You have done it again! I love it all! You deserve something so much better than this pain. I wish I could just hand it to you! Bethany
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On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, AHHH
(187) wrote:
oh my this is so sad, and so lovely, and deserves a way better comment than this...beautiful, magnificent write- michelle
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A former member wrote:
Wonderful,I could just feel the pain and how much emotion you put into it. Really awesome.