Visions

By mysticventures


I am the divine spark

You see in your mother

your brother

your lover

For I am -

Love


I am the suckling foal

the evening tide

the thunderstorm

the rose

For I am -

Life


Manifest is all things

great and small

I am

That I am

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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Tuesday, August 3, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mari On Tuesday, May 23, 2006, Mari (425)By person wrote:

    love love love the universal solution; its great isnt it?

  • A former member wrote: This was simple yet elegant. You said a lot with few words. Very thought provoking, nicely done:) ~Ship!

  • Zara Synn On Saturday, August 7, 2004, Zara Synn (57)By person wrote:

    Love the descriptions of Life; The evening tide and the rose - paints a beautiful picture.

  • sixsixnine On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    you don't stop amazing me;) love the feel of this! *669*

  • Anth On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    its a kind of grand unified theory,of poitiveness and truth,and expressed in a manifestation that is without flaw,clear and brilliant

  • xX pretty vacant Xx On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, xX pretty vacant Xx (64)By person wrote:

    fucking hell that was beautiful... there's something about your words here that were haunting. i love it.

  • Zhee On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    lovely and serene...

  • manywalks On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, manywalks (750)By person wrote:

    Mystic, ahhh, this was soft and near perfect. A calming piece to read. ~ wen

  • Whisper On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, Whisper (112)By person wrote:

    This is a very nice write. I love it. -BT-

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