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Catch Twenty-Two
By GirlintheBox
the choices i make always seem to break
this hell that i call life
they send down rains of unbearable pain
a thunderstorm of strife
but if i choose not to choose then i will still lose
im caught in a catch twenty-two
i can sink or swim, but i still will not win
for i'm cursed in all that i do
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Copyright 2004 Krystal Bray
Published on Tuesday, August 3, 2004.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Catch Twenty-Two"
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On Tuesday, September 26, 2006, mywristshurt
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sucks to be you.. i liked the poem though
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On Saturday, November 13, 2004, Savannah
(218) wrote:
Awesome flow. I really love your works.
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On Thursday, August 5, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335) wrote:
wow, catch 22 was an impressive write...i enjoyed the meaning behind it & every word. welcome to DP :) -MeL-
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On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
this poem is so great--I love the rolercoaster metaphor, I love your word choice, structure and rhymen scheme and I also love the insane voice that comes through here I have a couple poems with that voice myself)I look forward to reading more by you
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A former member wrote:
I agree with the commenters here who came to visit before me. You should listen to the 13th Floor Elevators. They also recorded a song called "Roller Coaster" (the song title is 2 words).
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A former member wrote:
ohh my..I completely in my own way I'm sure...understand and feel this...It's like you were writing for me and my life...amazing @)---;--- ~*~Pixie~*~
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On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, AHHH
(187) wrote:
awesome - michelle
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