Winter this year wouldn't be that cold (for Blood of Winter)

By aXe FactoR

Like sizzling sparks ignited into dazzling fireworks
Though evanescent still leaves a feeling of warmth
Ever comforting, never discouraging
I know my stay here in DP isn't for nought.

To which days pass & seasons change
& time seem to disappear in dusky sunlight & smoke
One would never forget someone special
Who uses winter to pale the pelting sunlight,
tinting the mountain gold

Where to me, a world lit by computer screens instead of the sun doesn't matter anymore
As it is through here where i found release from harsh lines and countless chores
Through it all my concentration narrows down to a single thought
Which is to credit my Poet-hero for the endless smiles he has brought

& just like a conductor climaxing his piece to the crescendo
and feeling immense pride as he finishes it hearing an encore,
I lay awake with a feeling of contentment in my heart,
Knowing that winter this year wouldn't be that cold...

(Well Dan, this piece is specially written 4 u...Thanks loads 4 being one of the lights in my life, & 4 all the nice emails we exchanged. i thought its due time i credit u 4 ya kindness & friendship. My writing ain't great, but i hope u'll like it all the same :) )

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Copyright 2004 MeL :)
Published on Saturday, July 31, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • murder_in_clubland On Tuesday, December 14, 2004, murder_in_clubland (424)By person wrote:

    awww so sweet and dedicated :) ~ss

  • A former member wrote: I like your use of adjectives here, Mel! ~Shane~

  • A former member wrote: From time to time, there are a couple people I've written tributes to here on DP myself, simply because what they say moves me more than what I say. The tributes are like this but they don't rhyme. It's nice to see these. ~Shane~

  • Blood of Winter On Sunday, August 1, 2004, Blood of Winter (300)By person wrote:

    Everytime someone has written something for me here I have taken in everyword and stitched them to my I have a new patch to wear with pride from this beautiful friend of mine...

  • Blood of Winter On Sunday, August 1, 2004, Blood of Winter (300)By person wrote:

    see, what you see here is a part of me that most don't and won't ever most of my friends I am just Dan or Tebo, here I am Blood of Winter, and I am as much him as he is me...Thank You so much...

  • aXe FactoR On Monday, August 2, 2004, aXe FactoR (342)By person wrote:


  • sixsixnine On Sunday, August 1, 2004, sixsixnine (487)By person wrote:

    i really feel this piece* great work! again .. blood of winter's very lucky to have you as friend & so am i....*669*

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